Eagle's Blessing - Enchanted Signature Item for Kindreth in the 24th

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Eagle's Blessing - Enchanted Signature Item for Kindreth in the 24th

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Background: Kindreth is an elf vagabond on the Rifts equivalent of a decades-long walkabout when he bumps into the 24th COT. He has been to a lot of places in his 120ish years of life and collected many cool things during his travels, including a necklace with a pendant of an eagle claw gripping a crystal formation. For reference,
Bearded Elf Vagabond.png
is Kindreth's avatar art, which shows the necklace.

The art got me wondering what the talon necklace he's wearing might do, so I tried to create something thematic that would enhance archetypal eagle traits for the wearer.
  • Base Item: Multi-Optics Helmet, retrapped as an enchanted necklace per the A&M enchanted item rules: By donning the necklace, the wearer gains some of the incredible sight and hunting instincts of an eagle. Eagle's Blessing provides +2 to sight-based Notice checks or to offset Range penalties and allows the wearer to ignore all Illumination penalties. In addition, the wearer is at +1 for attack rolls made with up to
    The reason I went this way instead of just sticking with calibrated shooting weapons is because eagles hunt with talons and I wanted to include melee weapons to reflect that. I didn't want to completely lose the shooting bonus, because that works great with the vision and range enhancements, and I tried to balance utility and theme. Two weapons seemed reasonable (1 melee and 1 ranged), and I threw in a ceremony to add flavor and prevent mid-battle switching so as to counterbalance the additional utility. I also dropped the other more ancillary benefits of a Multi-Optics Helmet, which is mentioned below.
    Switching weapons requires a bonding ceremony lasting approximately an hour. The necklace does not provide any of the other benefits of a Multi-Optics Helmet (i.e., no armor for the head area or built in radio). Even though it is trapped as a necklace, this item still affects the eyesight of the wearer, and so no other vision enhancing items (i.e., binoculars, cybernetics, etc.) stack with it.
  • Major Enchantments: Acrobat Edge and Combat Acrobat Edge. The wearer gains some of the grace of an eagle.
  • Minor Enchantments: +1 to Agility checks, +2 Pace. The wearer gains some of the mobility and speed of an eagle.
Edit: I'm also adding in as flavor that the eye color of the wearer changes to match the color of the arcane crystal held in the eagle's talon.
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Re: Eagle's Blessing - Enchanted Signature Item for Kindreth in the 24th

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Looks good.
I would go with Danger Sense and Sixth Sense, but overall this looks good and I approve.
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1 = 2 of Clubs
2 = 2 of Diamonds
3 = 2 of Hearts
4 = 2 of Spades
5 = 3 of Clubs
6 = 3 of Diamonds
7 = 3 of Hearts
8 = 3 of Spades
9 = 4 of Clubs
10 = 4 of Diamonds
11 = 4 of Hearts
12 = 4 of Spades
13 = 5 of Clubs
14 = 5 of Diamonds
15 = 5 of Hearts
16 = 5 of Spades
- reroll line for quickness & activation for Calculating -
17 = 6 of Clubs
18 = 6 of Diamonds
19 = 6 of Hearts
20 = 6 of Spades
21 = 7 of Clubs
22 = 7 of Diamonds
23 = 7 of Hearts
24 = 7 of Spades
25 = 8 of Clubs
26 = 8 of Diamonds
27 = 8 of Hearts
28 = 8 of Spades
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29 = 9 of Clubs
30 = 9 of Diamonds
31 = 9 of Hearts
32 = 9 of Spades
33 = 10 of Clubs
34 = 10 of Diamonds
35 = 10 of Hearts
36 = 10 of Spades
37 = J of Clubs
38 = J of Diamonds
39 = J of Hearts
40 = J of Spades
41 = Q of Clubs
42 = Q of Diamonds
43 = Q of Hearts
44 = Q of Spades
45 = K of Clubs
46 = K of Diamonds
47 = K of Hearts
48 = K of Spades
49 = A of Clubs
50 = A of Diamonds
51 = A of Hearts
52 = A of Spades
53 = Jokers = They are equal
54 = Jokers = They are equal
- If no reroll is being used then there are 2 extra jokers -
55 = Jokers = They are equal
56 = Jokers = They are equal
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Re: Eagle's Blessing - Enchanted Signature Item for Kindreth in the 24th

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Thanks! I considered those, too; they certainly tie in well with the "eagle eye" concept. Ultimately I went with the Acrobat Edge tree because I love the idea of mimicking an eagle's grace, but the Sense edges could definitely also have fit the theme.
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Re: Eagle's Blessing - Enchanted Signature Item for Kindreth in the 24th

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Needs pricing, including "magic equivalent" mark-up. Otherwise, looks awesome. Approve!
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Re: Eagle's Blessing - Enchanted Signature Item for Kindreth in the 24th

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Freemage wrote: Tue Dec 29, 2020 7:29 am Needs pricing, including "magic equivalent" mark-up. Otherwise, looks awesome. Approve!
I completely forgot about pricing. Good catch! I'll work that up.
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Re: Eagle's Blessing - Enchanted Signature Item for Kindreth in the 24th

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Approved
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