NEEDS REVIEW FOR LOST JUNGLES - Christian King - Psi Warrior

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Character for review

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Credits 4d6*100: [1, 4, 1, 6]*10 = 120

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Gear and Valuables 2d4*500: [1, 2]*50 = 150

MARS F&G 1d20: [15] = 15 1d20: [4] = 4 MARS F&G 1d20: [6] = 6 Psionics 1d20: [5] = 5

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Education 1d20: [10] = 10
Training 1d20: [8] = 8

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Christian King
Seasoned Male Human, MARS Psi-Warrior

Iconic Framework: MARS Psi-Warrior

Background
Raised in Psyscape, Christian run to the furthest points all over North America discovering everything he could in the pursuit of person entertainment. Heroic at heart and a wonderer by trade, Christian finds every excuse to go some place new.


Attributes: Agility d8, Smarts d10, Spirit d6, Strength d8, Vigor d6

Skills: Athletics d8, Common Knowledge d6, Fighting d8, Language (Dragonese/Elf) d6, Language (Native) d8, Language (Spanish) d6, Notice d8, Occult d8, Persuasion d4, Psionics d8, Riding d8, Shooting d6, Stealth d6, Survival d6+2

Pace: 6; Parry: 7; Toughness: 12 (5) Strain: 6/6

Hindrances: Code of Honor, Heroic, Overconfident, Vow (major, ) <-----Vow?

Edges: Acrobat, Adept () <----? , Beast Master (), Beast Master (), Block, Chi, Luck, Martial Artist, Power Points, Psi-Blade, Psi-Shield, Psychic of Psyscape, Woodsman.

Armor: Huntsman Medium Personal
Armor (Armor 5)

Weapons: Unarmed (Range Melee, Damage Str+d4, +1 to Hit), Psi-Blade (Range Melee, Damage Str+d12, AP 16, +1 to Hit, M.D.C.), Psi-Pike (Range Melee, Damage Str+2d8, AP 8, M.D.C., Reach 2), Survival Knife (Range Melee, Damage Str+d4), Wilk’s 320 Laser Pistol (Range 15/30/60, Damage 3d6, ROF 1, AP 2), Wooden Stakes (Range Melee, Damage Str+d4)

Gear: NG-S2 Survival Pack, Wooden Cross

Languages: Spanish (d6), Dragonese/Elf (d6), Native (native, d8)

Current Wealth: 270 cr

Arcane Background: Psionics (Rifts® TLPG)
I.S.P.: 15
Powers: Boost/Lower Trait (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p156; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Deflection (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p157-158), Detect Arcana (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p158; Innate Power; Limitations: One Aspect, Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +2), Empathy (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p160), Smite (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p168; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Telekinesis (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169), Warrior's Gift (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169-170)

Special Abilities
Psionics: Power Points: 15; Powers: Boost/Lower Trait (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p156; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Deflection (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p157-158), Detect Arcana (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p158; Innate Power; Limitations: One Aspect, Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +2), Empathy (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p160), Smite (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p168; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Telekinesis (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169), Warrior's Gift (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169-170)

Languages Known: Spanish (d6), Dragonese/Elf (d6), Native (native, d8)
MARS Advances: Psi-Warriors begin as Seasoned heroes.
Psi-Warrior Psionics: Psionics d6, Arcane Background (Psionics), 10 ISP, as well as boost/lower Trait*, smite*, telekinesis, and choose two powers.

Psi-Warrior Skills & Edges: Fighting d6, as well as the Adept, Block, Chi, Psi-Shield, and Psi-Blade Edges.

Psi-Warrior Resistance: +2 on all Vigor checks to resist Cold, Heat, Hunger, Sleep, or Thirst.
The Arts of Offense: Psi-Blade counts as Claws when applying bonuses from Edges.

Psi-Warrior Code: Begin with either the Code of Honor or Heroic Hindrance for no added benefit.

Far-Traveller (Hero's Journey): Far-Traveller:Your character gains a +2 on any Common Knowledge rolls related to geography and understanding the people and places of North America. He also gains a +2 on Survival and Networking checks in North America.

Starting Bennies: 4

Advances
Novice Advances
Raise Attribute: SmartsEdge: Psychic of PsyscapeEdge: LuckSeasoned Advances
Edge: Martial Artist
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Current Load: 52.25 (61)
Books In Use: Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition, Rifts®: Arcana and Mysticism, Rifts®: Blood and Banes, Rifts®: Empires of Humanity, Rifts®: Savage Foes of North America, Rifts®: The Tomorrow Legion Players Guide, Rifts®: Tomorrow Legion Field ManualSetting Rules: Born a Hero, Born a Hero includes Powers, Character Frameworks, Cyberware Tab, Rifts® M.D.C., Strain Characteristic (for Cyberware), Super StrengthValidity: Character appears valid and optimal

[Daniel]

What game is this for?

Modified your formatting some....

@ChristianKing

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Christian King
Seasoned Male Human, MARS Psi-Warrior

Iconic Framework: MARS Psi-Warrior
Background
Raised in Psyscape, Christian run to the furthest points all over North America discovering everything he could in the pursuit of person entertainment. Heroic at heart and a wonderer by trade, Christian finds every excuse to go some place new.


Attributes: Agility d8, Smarts d10, Spirit d6, Strength d8, Vigor d6
Skills: Athletics d8, Common Knowledge d6, Fighting d8, Language (Dragonese/Elf) d6, Language (Native) d8, Language (Spanish) d6, Notice d8, Occult d8, Persuasion d4, Psionics d8, Riding d8, Shooting d6, Stealth d6, Survival d6+2
Pace: 6; Parry: 7; Toughness: 12 (5)
Strain: 6/6
Hindrances: Code of Honor, Heroic, Overconfident, Vow (major, Serve Psyscape)
Edges: Acrobat, Adept (Boost Trait), Beast Master (Learherwing), Beast Master (V-Raptor), Block, Chi, Luck, Martial Artist, Power Points, Psi-Blade, Psi-Shield, Psychic of Psyscape, Woodsman
Armor: Huntsman Medium Personal Armor (Armor 5)
Weapons: Unarmed (Range Melee, Damage Str+d4, +1 to Hit), Psi-Blade (Range Melee, Damage Str+d12, AP 16, +1 to Hit, M.D.C.), Psi-Pike (Range Melee, Damage Str+2d8, AP 8, M.D.C., Reach 2), Survival Knife (Range Melee, Damage Str+d4), Wilk’s 320 Laser Pistol (Range 15/30/60, Damage 3d6, ROF 1, AP 2), Wooden Stakes (Range Melee, Damage Str+d4)
Gear: NG-S2 Survival Pack, Wooden Cross
Languages: Spanish (d6), Dragonese/Elf (d6), Native (native, d8)
Current Wealth: 270 cr
Arcane Background: Psionics (Rifts® TLPG)I.S.P.: 15Powers: Boost/Lower Trait (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p156; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Deflection (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p157-158), Detect Arcana (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p158; Innate Power; Limitations: One Aspect, Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +2), Empathy (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p160), Smite (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p168; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Telekinesis (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169), Warrior's Gift (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169-170)
Special Abilities
Psionics: Power Points: 15; Powers: Boost/Lower Trait (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p156; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Deflection (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p157-158), Detect Arcana (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p158; Innate Power; Limitations: One Aspect, Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +2), Empathy (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p160), Smite (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p168; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Telekinesis (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169), Warrior's Gift (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169-170)
Languages Known: Spanish (d6), Dragonese/Elf (d6), Native (native, d8)
MARS Advances: Psi-Warriors begin as Seasoned heroes.
Psi-Warrior Psionics: Psionics d6, Arcane Background (Psionics), 10 ISP, as well as boost/lower Trait*, smite*, telekinesis, and choose two powers.
Psi-Warrior Skills &amp; Edges: Fighting d6, as well as the Adept, Block, Chi, Psi-Shield, and Psi-Blade Edges.
Psi-Warrior Resistance: +2 on all Vigor checks to resist Cold, Heat, Hunger, Sleep, or Thirst.
The Arts of Offense: Psi-Blade counts as Claws when applying bonuses from Edges.
Psi-Warrior Code: Begin with either the Code of Honor or Heroic Hindrance for no added benefit.
Far-Traveller (Hero's Journey): Far-Traveller:Your character gains a +2 on any Common Knowledge rolls related to geography and understanding the people and places of North America. He also gains a +2 on Survival and Networking checks in North America.

Starting Bennies: 4
Advances
Novice Advances
Raise Attribute: SmartsEdge: Psychic of PsyscapeEdge: LuckSeasoned Advances
Edge: Martial Artist
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Current Load: 52.25 (61)
Books In Use: Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition, Rifts®: Arcana and Mysticism, Rifts®: Blood and Banes, Rifts®: Empires of Humanity, Rifts®: Savage Foes of North America, Rifts®: The Tomorrow Legion Players Guide, Rifts®: Tomorrow Legion Field ManualSetting Rules: Born a Hero, Born a Hero includes Powers, Character Frameworks, Cyberware Tab, Rifts® M.D.C., Strain Characteristic (for Cyberware), Super StrengthValidity: Character appears valid and optimal

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@ChristianKing
Your adept should be a power type not a power. Adept (psionics). Make sure you pick one power per rank for the adept and check it as innate in savaged.us.
Also for MARS we are at Heroic 1, so add the advances.

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Christian King
Heroic Male Human, MARS Psi-Warrior

Iconic Framework: MARS Psi-Warrior
Background
Raised in Psyscape, Christian run to the furthest points all over North America discovering everything he could in the pursuit of person entertainment. Heroic at heart and a wonderer by trade, Christian finds every excuse to go some place new.


Attributes: Agility d10, Smarts d10, Spirit d6, Strength d8, Vigor d6
Skills: Athletics d10, Common Knowledge d6, Fighting d10, Language (Dragonese/Elf) d6, Language (Native) d8, Language (Spanish) d6, Notice d8, Occult d8, Persuasion d4, Psionics d8, Riding d8, Shooting d6, Stealth d6, Survival d6+2
Pace: 8; Running Die: d8; Parry: 8; Toughness: 12 (5)
Strain: 6/6
Hindrances: Code of Honor, Heroic, Overconfident, Vow (major, Serve Psyscape)
Edges: Acrobat, Adept (Psionics), Beast Master (Learherwing), Beast Master (V-Raptor), Block, Chi, Fleet-Footed, Frenzy, Great Luck, Luck, Martial Artist, Martial Warrior, Monster Slayer, New Powers (Sloth/Speed, Protection), Power Points, Psi-Blade, Psi-Shield, Psychic of Psyscape, Woodsman
Armor: Huntsman Medium Personal Armor (Armor 5)
Weapons: Unarmed (Range Melee, Damage Str+d6, +2 to Hit), Psi-Blade (Range Melee, Damage Str+d12+1+smite, AP 16, +2 to Hit, M.D.C.), Psi-Pike (Range Melee, Damage Str+2d8, AP 8, M.D.C., Reach 2), Survival Knife (Range Melee, Damage Str+d4), Wilk’s 320 Laser Pistol (Range 15/30/60, Damage 3d6, ROF 1, AP 2), Wooden Stakes (Range Melee, Damage Str+d4)
Gear: NG-S2 Survival Pack, Wooden Cross
Languages: Spanish (d6), Dragonese/Elf (d6), Native (native, d8)
Current Wealth: 270 cr
Arcane Background: Psionics (Rifts® TLPG)I.S.P.: 15Powers: Boost/Lower Trait (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p156; Innate Power; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Deflection (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p157-158; Innate Power), Detect Arcana (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p158; Innate Power; Limitations: One Aspect, Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +2), Empathy (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p160), Protection (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p165-166), Smite (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p168; Innate Power; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Speed (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p167; Innate Power; Limitations: One Aspect), Telekinesis (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169), Warrior's Gift (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169-170; Innate Power)
Special Abilities
Psionics: Power Points: 15; Powers: Boost/Lower Trait (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p156; Innate Power; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Deflection (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p157-158; Innate Power), Detect Arcana (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p158; Innate Power; Limitations: One Aspect, Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +2), Empathy (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p160), Protection (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p165-166), Smite (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p168; Innate Power; Limitations: Self (limited); Skill Bonus: +1), Speed (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p167; Innate Power; Limitations: One Aspect), Telekinesis (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169), Warrior's Gift (Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition p169-170; Innate Power)
Languages Known: Spanish (d6), Dragonese/Elf (d6), Native (native, d8)
MARS Advances: Psi-Warriors begin as Seasoned heroes.
Psi-Warrior Psionics: Psionics d6, Arcane Background (Psionics), 10 ISP, as well as boost/lower Trait*, smite*, telekinesis, and choose two powers.
Psi-Warrior Skills &amp; Edges: Fighting d6, as well as the Adept, Block, Chi, Psi-Shield, and Psi-Blade Edges.
Psi-Warrior Resistance: +2 on all Vigor checks to resist Cold, Heat, Hunger, Sleep, or Thirst.
The Arts of Offense: Psi-Blade counts as Claws when applying bonuses from Edges.
Psi-Warrior Code: Begin with either the Code of Honor or Heroic Hindrance for no added benefit.
Far-Traveller (Hero's Journey): Far-Traveller:Your character gains a +2 on any Common Knowledge rolls related to geography and understanding the people and places of North America. He also gains a +2 on Survival and Networking checks in North America.

Starting Bennies: 5
Advances
Novice Advances
Raise Attribute: Smarts
Edge: Psychic of Psyscape
Edge: Luck
Seasoned Advances
Edge: Martial Artist
Raise Attribute: Agility
Edge: Great Luck
Raise Skills: Athletics/Fighting
Veteran Advances
Edge: Martial Warrior
Edge: New Powers (Sloth/Speed, Protection)
Edge: Monster Slayer
Edge: Frenzy
Heroic Advances
Edge: Fleet-Footed
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Current Load: 52.25 (61)
Books In Use: Savage Worlds: Adventure Edition, Rifts®: Arcana and Mysticism, Rifts®: Blood and Banes, Rifts®: Empires of Humanity, Rifts®: Savage Foes of North America, Rifts®: The Tomorrow Legion Players Guide, Rifts®: Tomorrow Legion Field ManualSetting Rules: Born a Hero, Born a Hero includes Powers, Character Frameworks, Cyberware Tab, Rifts® M.D.C., Strain Characteristic (for Cyberware), Super StrengthValidity: Character appears valid and optimal

[Technospawn]

The psi-blade is a Mega Damage melee weapon dealing Strength + Smarts damage, with AP equal to Psionics × 2.
The Arts of Offense: Psi-Blade counts as Claws when applying bonuses from Edges.
Per an OA the claw edges add to strength and smarts. so Savaged.us calculates the damage wrong.

Correct calculation is
Smarts d10 + strength d8 + smite
Martial artist and martial warrior adds 2 die types so you have Smarts d12+1 + Strength D12 + Smite (base is 2d12+1+smite, AP 16)

Approved.