Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

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Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Seswarick » Thu Sep 13, 2018 2:40 am

Crafted from the unique electro-reactive crystals of the Tesla Valley, the Stormheart was designed to help a zapper intensify their aura to make it more effectively resist damage or even prevent attacks from hitting altogether.


Base Item:CAF Elite Corps Load-Bearing Chest Rig (Patron Item)
Features:
• 12 attachment points
• Characters with Super Strength (TLPG p. 65) will multiply their Load limit by 1.4 (or 2.0 if they have Brawny), while normal characters will increase their load limit to Strength x 7 (or Strength x10 if they have Brawny) in pounds.
• Integrated IRMSS: 20,000 credits to recharge (TLPG, p.104)
Attachment points can be utilized to carry 1 each of the following item types: sidearm, magazine, E-clip, grenade, canteen, food ration pack, minor items or individual tools.

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Minor Upgrades
  • +2 armor to Electric Aura when it is activated. [+5,000 credits +2d6 hours]
  • +2 armor to Electric Aura when it is activated. [+5,000 credits +2d6 hours]
Major Upgrades
  • +1 die-type to Vigor when Electric Aura is activated. [+10,000, +2d6 days] (based on +1d to a trait)
  • +1 die-type to Vigor when Electric Aura is activated. [+10,000, +2d6 days] (based on +1d to a trait)
  • Add Armor Power [20,000, +3d6 days]
  • Add Dodge to device and +1 Power Point to activate cost [+40,000 +5d6 days].
Activation Cost: 2 PPE/hr
Total Value (for repair purposes): 91,100 Credits
Last edited by Seswarick on Mon Oct 29, 2018 11:49 am, edited 6 times in total.
Active Effects:
  • Time Twister belt:(when activated) -2 to ranged attacks against wearer, +2 to wearers parry, 4x pace
    Stormheart: +4 to armor of Electric Aura power, +2 die type to vigor, and gain Dodge edge when active. Cost 2 ISP/hr
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Pace: 4/12 flying, 16/48 w belt; Parry: 5/7 w belt Toughness: 5 regular 11(6) w aura 17(10) w aura & Stormheart
Combat-Relevant Edges & Abilities:
  • List of Abilities:
    Elan: When you spend a Benny on a Trait roll (including Soak rolls), add +2 to the final total.
    Time Twister belt:(when activated) -2 to ranged attacks against wearer, +2 to wearers parry, 4x pace
    Stormheart: +4 to armor of Electric Aura power, +2 die type to vigor, and gain Dodge edge when active. Cost 2 ISP/hr
Wounds: 0/3; Fatigue: 0/2; ISP/PPE: 8/30
Bennies: 1/3 1 red bennie
Adventure Cards
  • #: Card - Effect
    10 Adrenaline Surge: Your hero gets an additional and immediate turn (including new movement).
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Characters Seswarick (Main Acc), Barinthasheer, Antipas, Harris LaVode

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Re: Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Freemage » Thu Sep 13, 2018 7:40 am

Seswarick wrote:Crafted from the unique electro-reactive crystals of the Tesla Valley, the Stormheart was designed to help a zapper intensify their aura to make it more effectively resist damage or even prevent attacks from hitting altogether.


Base Item: A crystal and copper amulet
TW Item

Minor Upgrades
  • +2 armor to Electric Aura when it is activated. [+5,000 credits +2d6 hours]
  • +2 armor to Electric Aura when it is activated. [+5,000 credits +2d6 hours]
Major Upgrades
  • +1 toughness to Electric Aura when it is activated. [+10,000, +2d6 days] (based on +1d to a trait)
  • +1 toughness to Electric Aura when it is activated. [+10,000, +2d6 days] (based on +1d to a trait)
  • Add Deflection Power, activates with Electric Aura +1 PPE cost [100,000, +3d6 days]
  • Add Dodge to device and +1 Power Point to activate cost [+40,000 +5d6 days].
Armor Power Points: 2 Range: Touch Duration: 3 (1/round) Success grants the recipient 2 points of Armor. A raise grants 4 points of Armor.
First off, I'd like to suggest something a bit more than a simple amulet--for this, I'm seeing a kind of harness, almost; copper belt, anklets, bracelets and choker, connected by copper wires and adorned with crystals. When he activates the aura, it arcs through all the wiring, enhancing the aura.

Having it work off the Electric Aura (rather than a suit of armor, which would be redundant to the point of worthlessness to Bursters and their ilk) is clever, and a reasonable extension of the rules, in my mind.

Adding Toughness to the Aura is a bit weird--note that there's no option for that for Body Armor. But! There is an option--just use the standard Major Mod of +1 Die-type to Vigor. Unless you're at Vigor d12, that'll get you the Toughness Boost, anyway. There's no need to reinvent the wheel, here.

Dodge is no issue.

Having Deflection activate as a free action with the use of Electric Aura, however, IS an issue. For one thing, you're not actually rolling to activate your Aura, so you aren't rolling to activate the Power. That's all kinds of wonky (as it also means no ability to either Fail or Raise). I'd say just give it the Deflection Power, same as any other TW item, and it's simply something he can activate with a Psionics roll, at the usual ISP cost.

Also, the bit I highlighted in red--is that meant to be part of the item?

Here's what you end up with if you take all my suggestions:
Base Item: A crystal and copper body harness (1,000 credits base price).
TW Item

Minor Upgrades
  • +2 armor to Electric Aura when it is activated. [+5,000 credits +2d6 hours]
  • +2 armor to Electric Aura when it is activated. [+5,000 credits +2d6 hours]
Major Upgrades
  • +1 die-type to Vigor when Electric Aura is activated. [+10,000, +2d6 days]
  • +1 die-type to Vigor when Electric Aura is activated. [+10,000, +2d6 days]
  • Add Deflection Power (Electric/Jazz Trapping) [+20,000, +3d6 days]
  • Add Dodge to device and +1 Power Point to activate cost [+40,000 +5d6 days]
Activation Cost: 2 PPE/hr
Total Value (for repair purposes): 91,100 Credits

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Re: Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Seswarick » Thu Sep 13, 2018 12:13 pm

I went with toughness over full blown vigor because I saw Vigor as more enhancing him than the aura, so erring on the side of theme. I'll take it tho :)

Gotcha on the auto activate. Didn't consider that popping Aura is A a free action and B has no trait roll.


The transcript of the armor power is a mistake born of a late night and mild intoxication. I'd been considering adding it as well as deflection and transcribe the wrong one.
Active Effects:
  • Time Twister belt:(when activated) -2 to ranged attacks against wearer, +2 to wearers parry, 4x pace
    Stormheart: +4 to armor of Electric Aura power, +2 die type to vigor, and gain Dodge edge when active. Cost 2 ISP/hr
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Seswarick
Pace: 4/12 flying, 16/48 w belt; Parry: 5/7 w belt Toughness: 5 regular 11(6) w aura 17(10) w aura & Stormheart
Combat-Relevant Edges & Abilities:
  • List of Abilities:
    Elan: When you spend a Benny on a Trait roll (including Soak rolls), add +2 to the final total.
    Time Twister belt:(when activated) -2 to ranged attacks against wearer, +2 to wearers parry, 4x pace
    Stormheart: +4 to armor of Electric Aura power, +2 die type to vigor, and gain Dodge edge when active. Cost 2 ISP/hr
Wounds: 0/3; Fatigue: 0/2; ISP/PPE: 8/30
Bennies: 1/3 1 red bennie
Adventure Cards
  • #: Card - Effect
    10 Adrenaline Surge: Your hero gets an additional and immediate turn (including new movement).
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Re: Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Freemage » Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:09 pm

Think of it as the harness channeling the energy of the aura directly into his body, giving him an almost Juicer-like surge of adrenaline and enhancing his body's ability to handle stress and injury.

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Re: Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Tribe of One » Fri Sep 14, 2018 7:46 am

Good advice from Freemage, and the final version looks good to me.
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Re: Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Snake Eyes » Fri Sep 14, 2018 7:09 pm

Approved.
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Re: Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Seswarick » Sat Sep 29, 2018 7:03 pm

Edited to make the gear harness the base item. Please reassess.
Active Effects:
  • Time Twister belt:(when activated) -2 to ranged attacks against wearer, +2 to wearers parry, 4x pace
    Stormheart: +4 to armor of Electric Aura power, +2 die type to vigor, and gain Dodge edge when active. Cost 2 ISP/hr
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Seswarick
Seswarick
Pace: 4/12 flying, 16/48 w belt; Parry: 5/7 w belt Toughness: 5 regular 11(6) w aura 17(10) w aura & Stormheart
Combat-Relevant Edges & Abilities:
  • List of Abilities:
    Elan: When you spend a Benny on a Trait roll (including Soak rolls), add +2 to the final total.
    Time Twister belt:(when activated) -2 to ranged attacks against wearer, +2 to wearers parry, 4x pace
    Stormheart: +4 to armor of Electric Aura power, +2 die type to vigor, and gain Dodge edge when active. Cost 2 ISP/hr
Wounds: 0/3; Fatigue: 0/2; ISP/PPE: 8/30
Bennies: 1/3 1 red bennie
Adventure Cards
  • #: Card - Effect
    10 Adrenaline Surge: Your hero gets an additional and immediate turn (including new movement).
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Re: Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Koshnek » Mon Oct 01, 2018 4:06 pm

Assuming there's no issues with using the harness as a base item, approved.
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Re: Stormheart Signature Item (Seswarick)

Post by Tribe of One » Mon Oct 01, 2018 6:51 pm

You're all good.
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